假如你是光明中学的李华，假如你是光明中学学生会主席李华

Dear Sir,

My name is Li Hua, from Guang Ming High School in Beijing, China. I would like to apply for admission

to the English Department of your university. I am a seventeen-year-old boy, and now in senior grade 3. I am

sociable, easy-going, and good at communicating with others. I have made many friends and I can work well

in a team. Meanwhile, I am quite independent and it is easy for me to adapt to a new environment.

As a senior student, I have been working hard at my lessons and have managed to get fairly high grades.

I am especially good at English, and have won the first prize in an English Speech Contest. Therefore,

I believe English is a good major for me.

I should he grateful if you can take my application into consideration.

Looking forward to your early reply.

衫巧Yours

或举键答码sincerely,

不唯一

Zhang Ming,

I know you are now having trouble communicating with others, and you may often feel lonely. That’s because we are all new here and our classmates are not quite familiar with each other. But I think you can make it if you follow the advice below.

First, you should take an active part in the discussions and freely voice your own opinions. At the same time, learn to listen to others’ views. Second, you should learn about our classmates’ likes and dislikes. Gradually you can find something in common with us. In this way, you can get to know more about different people around you.

Above all, do remember that participating in activities with others together makes you share something with them. With time going on, I’m sure we’ll know you better and like to make friends with you.

Best wishes.

Yours,

Li Hua

试题分析：本题是一篇给材料作文，材料是考生熟悉的东西，考生不难理解写作的目的和要求，文章的题目已给出。考生重点应认真审题，审题包括几个方面雹陪橡:1.文章的时态2.内容要点。尤其内容要点的把握准确到位。3.考生乱塌要尽可能的使用较复杂的句子结构，尽量使用高级词汇以便得到较高的分数。

4.考生注意使用过渡词或者过渡句来使文章读起来比较流畅。

点评：本题难度适中。命题人作文源旁的要点没有一一列出，既给了学生的思维空间，又给了学生发挥自己的语言组织的能力的空间，没有把学生的思维控制在某些要点的组织上。